Ek ladka tha jo hamesha khamosh rehta tha. Phir ek din ek ladki aayi. Usne poocha, “Tum itne khamosh kyun rehte ho?” Ladke ne dheere se kaha, “Kuch log hamari zindagi mein bas… ek mausam ki tarah aate hain… lekin yaadein… hamesha ke liye chhod jaate hain.” Ladki thoda muskura kar boli, “Tum hamesha akele kyun baithte ho?” Ladka halka sa muskura kar bola, “Kyuki… koi mere paas baithna nahi chahta.” Tab ladki ne kaha, “Toh aaj se… main baithungi.” Phir dono saath mein haste hue park mein jaa baithe. Unhone dher saari baatein ki. Tab ladke ne poocha, “Shayad… isi ko pyaar kehte hain?” Ladki muskura kar boli, “Shayad… haan.” Phir dono roz park mein milne lage. Har din, har shaam… sirf ek dusre ke liye. Lekin ek din ladki ne kaha, “Ab mera transfer ho raha hai… mujhe dusre sheher jaana hoga.” Ladka khamosh ho gaya. Phir dheere se poocha, “Tum wapas kab aaogi?” Ladki ne halki si muskaan ke saath kaha, “Agar kismat ne chaha… toh phir milenge.” Ladka smile karte hue bola, “Main tumhara intezaar karunga.” Ladki boli, “Theek hai…” Lekin das saal beet gaye… ek lambe intezaar mein. “Kuch log jaate nahi… woh bas hamari kahani ban jaate hain.” “Pyaar hamesha saath rehne ka naam nahi… yaadon mein zinda rehne ka naam hai.” “Woh meri first love thi… aur shayad last bhi.” “Kismat ne hume alag kiya… lekin dil aaj bhi wahi hai. मेरी स्क्रिप्ट को नेचुरल हिन्दी-इंग्लिश मिक्स में दोबारा लिखो। उसमें सही जगह पर pause, emotions और आसान शब्द जोड़ो। ऐसा लगे कि मैं अपने किसी दोस्त से बात कर रहा हूँ। स्क्रिप्ट छोटी, मज़ेदार और engaging होनी चाहिए
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